The writing part
A straightforward introduction. Do not use dramatic words because they’re inappropriate when used in a historical context. It must contain a clue of what you will prove later on in your thesis. You’re learning how to write a historical essay that is based on real life and facts, not a romanticized interpretation of a simple event. If the subject you’re assigned is the Russian Revolution of 1917, your introduction should not read: “For as long as recorded history has existed, it has witnessed ideological clashes that often resulted in turmoil, bloodshed, displacement of people, and geographical alterations.” An introduction like this guarantees a failing grade. Now, here is a more concise and powerful one: “The success of the Russian Revolution of 1917 marked the rise of communism, which would later shape global affairs.” You may proceed to claim that communism’s rise was inevitable due to the centuries-long oppression of the common folk. Thesis. Ask yourself what it is you’re trying to prove. This is your own argument, your opinion on the subject and therefore, you need to explain it and support it with evidence. It’s not a repetition of a known fact. For instance, “The Russian Communists successfully overthrew the monarchy in 1917” is not a thesis statement, it is a fact. This is a thesis: “The birth of communism in Russia in 1917 had been the result of the cruelty of the Russian aristocracy towards the common people.” Your thesis, along with supporting evidence, must be discussed in each of the body’s paragraphs. As you strengthen your thesis statement from paragraph to paragraph, you must support every claim with evidence. Analysis of the thesis. Since your thesis must get stronger with every claim and supporting evidence in each of the body’s paragraphs, the analysis must be present in the transition from one paragraph to the next. Its purpose is to strengthen your argument. In a basic sense, the analysis should demonstrate the logical connection and relationship of one paragraph to the next, until you reach your conclusion. A convincing conclusion. Repeating or just summarizing the claims of your thesis statement is simply not enough. Your conclusion should wrap up what you have written in your introduction and prove the importance of your thesis statement and its claims. Your conclusion should be convincing and powerful enough to drive your reader to ask questions about the subject, like: “How might present-day Russia be if there had been forces that put an end to the suffering of the common people before 1917?” It must make the reader take interest in the subject and think about the greater effects of that particular event.